“The hot blazing sun shone like a flaming ball of fire over the cobalt ocean horizon…”
Yuk… I detest cliches…
Write what you know … that too is a cliche, but one that makes a lot of sense.
I write a great deal from what I know (could it be that I’m too lazy to research what I don’t know?)… and now, as I *gulp* advance in years, from memories stored in my data-bank of experience.
Some of the most formative adventures in my life occurred in the late 1970’s.
I accepted my first hospital lab position and moved to the Northwest Territories in Canada’s Arctic. I had scarcely turned 20, whiskers barely making their presence known on my chin.
There was so much to learn about so many things, jobs, new geographies and climates, and yes, romance and relationships were right near the top of my “need to know more” lineup.
In my late teens in Hamilton, I had dated a bit here and there and lived and cried through one “serious” relationship.
BUT.
All of my life experience to that point was reflected in the western cultural norm of boy chase girl, boy ask girl on date, etc… the formula, the standard pattern of young women playing coy and hard-to-get was ingrained in me by everything I saw around me in real life and in TV and movies.
And then I moved to Yellowknife (YK).
The rules I knew, my life’s accumulation of dictates, were tossed out the window of the PWA Boeing 737 that carried me from Hamilton to Edmonton and then finally YK.
It was thrilling and it was tumultuous and yes, it was even a bit scary.
All of a sudden, my role as a masculine “gentle predator” was turned on its head and I was as much prey as predator.
Who knew that the fairer sex could have a strong inner urge and bold approach to relations and boudoir activities? One young lady even gifted me a copy of the HITE REPORT. Clitoral …. what????
I won’t go into intimate details here, but all of this backstory leads me to today’s lyric writing.
This song lyric, THE PREDATOR is my little story of being pursued – pretty aggressively – by an attractive young nurse who, for whatever reason, set her sights on me as her sexual prey.
Sure, it was a bit thrilling and stimulating, but in this new world I’d entered, like Alice Through The Looking Glass, it sent a tiny shiver of uneasiness into my core.
So, here goes:
THE PREDATOR – Larry Green
VERSE
Icy YK nighttime
anticipation staggers the line
where mukluks crunch the snow
trembling northern lights that show
the trail of yes opposing no
VERSE
Delicious fever salsa dance
where my reason stands little chance
bestial hormones thrash and fight
my body tingles flight and fright
her instincts master o’er this chill night
VERSE
Seductress graces, sweetly talk
her witchcraft lays a winsome plot
sips of wine poured by Eros
the flame is set, the kindled spark
I’m prey that knows it’s marked
CHORUS
The ghost in my rear view mirror
is a smile and a tear
The cards once dealt were turned
the chase came clear
temptation’s game is rigged
Eden’s curse freshly learned
Sep 08, 2019 @ 08:13:26
Great lyrics Larry. Any wordsmith efforts on my part would be minor and of no real benefit to the song.
Being the only male nurse at Stanton YK Hospital back in those days I’m glad you clarified the gender in your lead up post to the lyrics otherwise your readers, no doubt, would have assumed it was me pursuing you….not that I didn’t want to but I had standards!!!!!🤣😂
😁
Peace,
Jim
Sep 10, 2019 @ 15:01:22
NOW you tell me you have standards… I waited for your pursuit in YK so long but it just never came so I sadly packed up and left for the south…. WAIT A MINUTE… YOU left YK before me and went and married that east coast cutie that shares a west coast address with you today!! Thanks for the laugh and the thumbs up Uncle Jimmy!!