Remember a couple of weeks back when I said I’d be using you to help me work on songwriting? You do?
Fabulous!
‘Cause this is where we are today and I’ve got a few lyrical lines to share.
They’re pretty simple ones… nothing too flowery or poetically profound … but heartfelt and melancholy for me … and for others in my family.
I confuse myself. There must be a fatal flaw inside me because when I sit to write lyrics I almost always begin with the thought that … “this one I want to be light and fun and maybe even silly”…
… and then this shade of darkness bubbles to the surface out of nowhere… maybe I’m the Nowhere Man I mention in the song … maybe …
Anyway… here are some song lyrics I’ve written about my older brother – diagnosed with Alzheimer’s about 7 years ago.
He rides the amusement park rollercoaster where he’s stuck on the downhill slope with no chance for an uphill boost.
Today he’s far removed from the erudite, quirky intellectual – a PhD chemist, Monty Python lover – his family and friends knew for many decades. He lives in a care facility where he slowly dwindles but retains his easy smile and gentle demeanour.
It’s such a common scenario for so many …
If you have any suggestions or ideas for improvement, fire them at me.
Let’s go my friends:
Let’s Bake You A Banana Cake
VERSE
I called my brother the other day
when he answered I knew he wasn’t there
his voice held up strong but
the same world we didn’t share
at least not anymore.
VERSE
It’s funny that you can hear a smile
though the sound travels a thousand miles
the words are a salad, they even sound sane
Do you think you can remember my name?
No, not anymore
VERSE
Books linger hushed on your shelf
framed photos pretty your little room’s walls
with blue summer skies and childhood smiles
are prairie breezes sharing your favourite waltz?
I don’t think so anymore
CHORUS
Maybe you’re Lennon’s Nowhere Man
so let’s bake you a banana cake
’cause you’re kind of already there
there’s a batter of sorts
all mixed up of course
And you don’t know what you’re missing
VERSE
So let’s chat lightly for a bit mon frère
I’ll ask the questions, make the chatter
You’re pretty cheery so does it really matter?
We’ve sipped some wine, skied some trails
but, perhaps, not anymore
BRIDGE
There’s a thief in the house
taken the marbles and flown
the halls echo empty where you once roamed
CHORUS
Maybe you’re Lennon’s Nowhere Man
so let’s bake you a banana cake
’cause you’re kind of already there
there’s a batter of sorts
all mixed up of course
And you don’t know what you’re missing.
Jun 09, 2019 @ 13:46:48
I really appreciate your lyrics Larry. My mom has been travelling down this road for a couple of years…. It is so hard to watch a vibrant, organised, confident woman slowly change…week by week. She is so loved and I hope that we, her family, can help ease her journey.
Jun 10, 2019 @ 10:09:13
Thank you Margot. Sadly… so many are affected by Alzheimer’s … I’m sorry that your Mom and family are impacted as well… thanks for sharing your struggles and I wish you and your family well in the coming months …
Jun 12, 2019 @ 13:32:55
Ok Larry…….interesting exercise here. A great challenge to take someone else’s lyrics with only a glimmer of what the deeper meaning might be and to presume to make meaningful changes……especially without any sense of the music side of the equation. Here is my contribution and I offer this purely as part of your creative exercise to aid you in your creativity……take it as such. I am NOT a song writer so I don’t presume to know if these lyrics will serve any meaningful purpose to you. I have approached it as a poem. I have only addressed the 1st 4 verses:
I called my brother the other day
His voice so familiar yet so far away
Childhood days spent without a care
The same world now we don’t even share
Not any more
Over the phone I perceive his smile
So radiant it can travel a thousand miles
His words are a jumble at times sounding sane
I wonder-does he remember my name?
Not any more
Books linger gathering dust on your shelf
Faces of distant memories adorn your walls
of childhood smiles and blue summer skies
Are prairie breezes sharing your favourite waltz
Not any more
A lite chat it will be with you mon frere
I’ll ask the questions and provide the chatter
While you search for memories-does it really matter
We’ve sipped some wine and skied some trails
But…not any more
There you have my humble offering Larry.
Peace
Jim
Jun 13, 2019 @ 11:01:18
James… thank you so much for taking the time …making the effort… I hope you won’t mind if I use some of your revisions… I especially like “While you search for memories-does it really matter”… as for not being a songwriter? Bernie Taupin wrote all,or most of the lyrics for Elton John (but never a note of music)… I consider him a songwriter… I consider you the same… you are a deep thinker… poetry is a good match for you I think… thank you again my good friend!
Jun 13, 2019 @ 11:02:17
James… thank you so much for taking the time …making the effort… I hope you won’t mind if I use some of your revisions… I especially like “While you search for memories-does it really matter”… as for not being a songwriter? Bernie Taupin wrote all,or most of the lyrics for Elton John (but never a note of music)… I consider him a songwriter… I consider you the same… you are a deep thinker… poetry is a good match for you I think… thank you again my good friend!
Jun 13, 2019 @ 11:05:04
James… thank you so much for taking the time …making the effort… I hope you won’t mind if I use some of your revisions… I especially like “While you search for memories-does it really matter”… as for not being a songwriter? Bernie Taupin wrote all,or most of the lyrics for Elton John (but never a note of music)… I consider him a songwriter… I consider you the same… you are a deep thinker… poetry is a good match for you I think… thank you again my good friend!
Jun 13, 2019 @ 13:55:56
Thanks for the kind words Larry. Glad you found the lyrics helpful. Use them however you desire.
Peace,
Jim
Feb 21, 2021 @ 06:12:35